Tuesday, September 3, 2019

A student's reaction to Denzel Washington's speech

In my English for Academic and Professional Purposes (EAPP) class for Grade 11, I presented a video of Denzel Washington who gave Dillard University students four life goals in commencement speech as part of our topic lesson on Writing a Reaction Paper. Likewise, my students presented their outputs after watching Denzel's video. So here, I picked two best reactions written by my students.


A Reaction Written by Carolyn Gabres, Grade 11, BHS

   A man spoke in front of many graduating college students. He inspired them by telling that put  God first in everything you do. Every word that he stated is so meaningful. He said  “Say thank you in advance for what is already yours". In the end, all the audience gave Denzel Washington a round of applause.

    According to Denzel Washington “Have dreams, but have a goal”. He is an inspirer of the people who believes in God, a motivator to achieve everyone's goals. He also gives an advice to all the students who want to become successful someday. In 2018 he was invited by Dillard University in USA to speak in front of the graduating college students. One of his topics was all about dreaming. From the word "dream", five letters that contains a colorful meaning, it is all about the ambition you want to become in the future. One part of this is you need to plan about your goal, because he also said that "Dream without a goal is just a dream". One of the reasons why many students are studying hard because they want to help their family. We all know that putting God first in our life is the best thing we need to do before we go on our next step. God can help us to exceed our problem that we will encounter.

   "Life advices will change your future", the title of his speech. Speaking in front of many people is hard thing to do. But Denzel Washington did a great job. He spoke on the stage with a powerful confidence. He motivated all the graduating students to follow their dreams and never stop dreaming because God will help them. He made my day when I watched his speech. His expression can attract the audience to listen carefully. He wears a proper attire and that's good. I want to hear more inspirational message from him. I heard a different speech, but the words, the voice, and the way he delivered the speech is heart touching. I felt that I'm so blessed when I heard those messages from him. I want to be like him someday, a very inspiring speaker I've ever listened to.


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Future journalists of Balayang High School hone their skills for MSPC 2018

I was appointed  to train our senior and junior students about editorial writing in preparation of the municipal schools press conference to be hosted by Balayang High School from August 2 - 3, 2018. These young journalists are already providing important leadership in our profession and they have an extraordinary opportunity and extraordinary examples to shape journalism in their careers.

Equipping these learners with the skill in writing editorials, below are essentials they need before the the Municipal Schools Press Conference (MSPC). Best of luck to my trainees namely Jamaica Patron, Elena Ramos, Jacquilyn Escobar, John Russel Jacinto, Joyce Ann Polido, Princess Ann Garabiles, Cherry Racuya, Denise Balana and Shella Mae Nacario.

Our students will be competing in various categories with English and Filipino divisions:

Editorial writing
News writing
Sports news writing
Feature writing
Cartooning
Copyreading and headline writing ( skipped this year)
Collaborative desktop publishing


The Philippine government institutionalized campus journalism training in the school system with the Campus Journalism Act of 1991.

And our photos during those training.






Tips on Writing Newspaper Editorial Format
An editorial is a newspaper article that expresses one's opinion. An editorial can be about any topic, but is usually written about an issue that deals with our society. To build credibility, the opinion in the editorial must be backed up with facts and evidence to substantiate your opinion.

The facts and evidence must be gone through extensively to find the point of view you want to argue. With a point of view through an editorial piece, issues are given solutions that could be rendered to solve the actual problem at hand. A newspaper editorial may seem hard to write; but, initiative and passion about an issue gives you, the writer, the inside knowledge of making editorial writing easier.

Steps for Writing Newspaper Editorials
There are several different steps you need to follow in order to be successful when writing an editorial:

Choosing a Topic
The topic you choose is the most important part in writing a newspaper editorial. The best topics are those that are current issues among our society. If the topic is a current issue that everyone is already interested in then your editorial piece will engage reader’s attention.

If the topic you choose is an ongoing issue in our society, make sure to use the most recent information. However, you can use older information as sources to help prove your case. Do not make your editorial a controversial topic, unless that is that is your whole reason for writing it in the first place.

Choosing Your Opinion
You need to ask yourself, are you for or against the issue you have chosen as your topic for your newspaper editorial piece. You can not be on both sides of the fence when writing an editorial piece. The purpose for the editorial is to give your opinion, the writer’s opinion. With this in mind you must give a strong opinion, if not readers will not be as inclined to see your point of view.

Outline Your Editorial
Oh, the dreaded outline. With any type of research paper you have to do an outline. This is one of the biggest tips on writing newspaper editorial format that you should always follow. With an outline you know where you stand on the issue. The outline helps you, the writer, get your thoughts and opinions in order. The outline also helps you discover any swaying of opinions you may have missed by just diving head first into writing.

Writing Your Article
The first step to writing your newspaper editorial is to pick a headline that grabs reader’s attention. If you grab their attention from the very beginning they are more inclined to keep reading. Your opinion on the topic should be addressed in the introduction to your new editorial.

Newspaper editorials should have at least three arguments. These arguments of course should be backed up with facts and evidence from your research of the topic.

Other tips for writing editorials are:
Use statistics to help prove your argument.
Make sure your strongest argument is left for last.
Do not be passive in the arguments that come before the strongest. If this happens you are most likely not going to have readers reading your entire newspaper editorial.

Conclusion of Article
In a newspaper editorial, and with most anything else you write, your conclusion should sum up all the information you wrote about. The conclusion should be tied up into a neat little package so as to let readers get a recap of all the facts that you presented in your editorial.

Your conclusion should also have a few solutions you think would help with the issue at hand. You are getting the reader to engage in asking him or herself questions on how they stand on the particular issue in our society.

A student's reaction to Denzel Washington's speech

In my English for Academic and Professional Purposes (EAPP) class for Grade 11, I let my students watched a video of Denzel Washington who gave Dillard University students four life goals in commencement speech.

As part of our topic lesson on Writing a Reaction Paper, my students presented their outputs after watching Denzel's video. So here, I picked two best reactions written by my students. Read below.



A Reaction Written by Carolyn Gabres

A man spoke in front of many graduating college students. He inspired them by telling that put  God first in everything you do. Every word that he stated is so meaningful. He said  “Say thank you in advance for what is already yours". In the end, all the audience gave Denzel Washington a round of applause.
   According to Denzel Washington “Have dreams, but have a goal”. He is an inspirer of the people who believes in God, a motivator to achieve everyone's goals. He also gives an advice to all the students who want to become successful someday. In 2018 he was invited by Dillard University in USA to speak in front of the graduating college students. One of his topics was all about dreaming. From the word "dream", five letters that contains a colorful meaning, it is all about the ambition you want to become in the future. One part of this is you need to plan about your goal, because he also said that "Dream without a goal is just a dream". One of the reasons why many students are studying hard because they want to help their family. We all know that putting God first in our life is the best thing we need to do before we go on our next step. God can help us to exceed our problem that we will encounter.

   "Life advices will change your future", the title of his speech. Speaking in front of many people is hard thing to do. But Denzel Washington did a great job. He spoke on the stage with a powerful confidence. He motivated all the graduating students to follow their dreams and never stop dreaming because God will help them. He made my day when I watched his speech. His expression can attract the audience to listen carefully. He wears a proper attire and that's good. I want to hear a more inspirational message from him. I heard a different speech, but the words, the voice, and the way he delivered the speech is heart touching. I felt that I'm so blessed when I heard those messages from him. I want to be like him someday, a very inspiring speaker that ever

A student's reaction to Denzel Washington's speech

In my English for Academic and Professional Purposes (EAPP) class for Grade 11, I presented a video of Denzel Washington who gave Dillard Un...